Not sure what happened to your track but it seems like your low end got cutoff. If it was there this track would have been 5/5. Really wish the i could feel the bass I know this song has. I dig it but needs a re-render with the low freq fix.
Overall it sounded decent. I think you could definatly gain from adding some synths in the back to keep the atmosphere. Also, I didn't care much for the growl. Didn't really fit with the track, just really seems like it was overlaid in your track. Which program do you work in?
I use Ableton Live Intro, but I have absolutely no idea how to use it, so I'm really just going off of trial and error. I'll admit this track is poo, but it's a good example of what I can improve on. Thanks for the feedback :)
Really needs to be mixed better. The guitar clips alot, and the drums overpower everything. could sound 10x better with the sounds of the snare, cymbal, and the bass drum(?), turned down to let the guitar sound like it is supposed to be there. Could also use a bass guitar for some underlying support. Overall good but needs more.
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