Overall it sounded decent. I think you could definatly gain from adding some synths in the back to keep the atmosphere. Also, I didn't care much for the growl. Didn't really fit with the track, just really seems like it was overlaid in your track. Which program do you work in?

Really needs to be mixed better. The guitar clips alot, and the drums overpower everything. could sound 10x better with the sounds of the snare, cymbal, and the bass drum(?), turned down to let the guitar sound like it is supposed to be there. Could also use a bass guitar for some underlying support. Overall good but needs more.